A few poems I've written over the months. One or two of which might not make sense. I hope you enjoy them even if you can't understand 'em. As you might've guessed, the words in "-" are the title. Review, I love feedback, whether it be positive or negative.

-The Hunter-

Hunting.. seeing .. smelling.. watching the prey
Underground.. sneaking.. creeping.. stalking the flesh of life
Never seen.. never heard.. waiting for nightfall
Teeming with life soon to end..
Entering the forest.. mist, covering his tracks.. almost.
Red mist covering his leaving footsteps..
______a deep red blanket covering the fallen..
______and the hunt is over..
______and he waits once more.

-Greed-

And the powerful shall rule..
And the weak shall obey..
And the knowledgeable shall think..
And the ignorant shall wait..
And the rich shall bathe in money..
And the poor shall drown in loss..
And the owners of the world shall laugh..
And the envious shall cry..
And you will sit there, watching the sadness..
That we call the human race..

-One I Love-

Beautiful
Amazing
Kind
One I Love

Warm
Earnest
Heartfelt
One I Love

Holding
Carrying
Protecting
One I Love

Laughing
Running
Joyous
One I Love

Understanding
Helping
Comforting
One I Love

There are many more words I could use
But none would be good enough for you

How your eyes glisten in the night
I tremble slightly, you filling my sight

Oh so beautiful and lovely you are
The one and only keeper of my heart

So gentle, caring.. like a dove
That is why you are.. the One I Love

-Long Lost Feeling-

Places to be
Serene
Booming, Exploding, Silence - Broken
Places to run
King of nothing

Memories
The Future, The Past
Find your past
Walk your path
Does the walker choose the path?
Or the path choose the walker?

Enlightened Ignorance
Thoughtful, Serene again
Places to rest

Death hovers
But even in Death
May the Fallen be triumphant

And it is quiet once more
And i am alone
Away from the noise,
the terror,
the love
Am I lost?
Are we all lost?

We are all lost
Until we find ourselves..
And each other

And then music fills me,
bells ring,
trumpets blare,
the notes
Like bottled sunshine
And it is gone..
Gone in a flash

And alone I wait
for birds song once more...
Then I smile
I smile, not cry
I smile because it happened,
I do not cry because it is over

This post has been edited by GhoztMan: Oct 27 2009, 05:41 PM

They don't rhyme...

Lol jk. They're all well thought out I see.

Poems don't have to rhyme! In the poem "One I Love" I cheated by using a lot of half-rhymes... but oh well.. Something I myself like about "The Hunter" is that it's an acrostic, adds a cool effect.

This post has been edited by GhoztMan: Oct 27 2009, 05:39 PM