Protoman 56 Posted November 24, 2007 (edited) The Wish I glare upon the stars, wishing for the impossible The stars appear to be shining, twinkling amongst themselves I gritted my teeth, angered by their rejection I repeated the process, this time with my eyes closed Overwhelmed by darkness, I spoke the wish My eyes remained shut, still very hesitant to open them I've noticed another being in front of me as I gradually rose them She had blond hair, blue eyes, and an irresistible smile My mouth began to mold into a crooked grin, enraptured with delight We conversed for a while, laughing and flirting She seemed to be having a blast and so was I We took a long strode through the park, ignoring all questionable stares I bought her ice cream before venturing towards the monkey bars When we’ve arrived, I clung onto one; savoring my newly bought treat She whispered, “How long has it been”? I replied “Seventeen years, since you've past away” I just wrote this today after reading one of magic bitch's poems. Provide me with some imput on what you guys think. Edited November 24, 2007 by Protoman Share this post Link to post
Kenshyn 638 Posted November 24, 2007 Eh, I used to kind of write poetry, but grew out of it. Share this post Link to post
Protoman 56 Posted November 24, 2007 (edited) im not really a poetic dude, i just thought i'd write one when i had spare time. :D if i ever get a poem assignment, ill use this one. Edited November 24, 2007 by Protoman Share this post Link to post
Cripp 167 Posted November 24, 2007 Nice job what ever people say just do what you do best. Share this post Link to post