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"the Wish" By Protoman

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The Wish

 

 

I glare upon the stars, wishing for the impossible

The stars appear to be shining, twinkling amongst themselves

I gritted my teeth, angered by their rejection

I repeated the process, this time with my eyes closed

Overwhelmed by darkness, I spoke the wish

My eyes remained shut, still very hesitant to open them

I've noticed another being in front of me as I gradually rose them

She had blond hair, blue eyes, and an irresistible smile

My mouth began to mold into a crooked grin, enraptured with delight

We conversed for a while, laughing and flirting

She seemed to be having a blast and so was I

We took a long strode through the park, ignoring all questionable stares

I bought her ice cream before venturing towards the monkey bars

When we’ve arrived, I clung onto one; savoring my newly bought treat

She whispered, “How long has it been”?

I replied “Seventeen years, since you've past away”

 

 

I just wrote this today after reading one of magic bitch's poems. Provide me with some imput on what you guys think.

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Eh, I used to kind of write poetry, but grew out of it.

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Well I thought it was pretty good!

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im not really a poetic dude, i just thought i'd write one when i had spare time. :D

 

if i ever get a poem assignment, ill use this one.

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Nice job what ever people say just do what you do best.

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