The Storm... (poetry By Proslasher)

[ProSlasher 176]

The following was written by me. Enjoy.

 

A warm sunny day

with a few white clouds

becomes so ugly so fast

it's really quite odd.

 

The white clouds build

throughout the hours

until they are blue

and the sky is black

 

the air is sthick

the clouds are dense

the storm rolls in

as the birds flee

 

the clasp of thunder

then the light bolt

followed by strong wind

then reain at last

 

the rain's rage grows

the bolts come quicker

the thunder is louder

and the trees bend.

 

now starts the hail

as tree limbs fall

from the deadly winds

with no relief

 

now a loud hiss

fills the air with scare

people duck and cover

as the tornado stirs

 

the tornado comes through

plowing its path

then it all stops

"Is that all?"

 

the sky is still dark

people come out to view

the rain, the wind,

and hail all gone...

 

thirty seconds pass

then a loud BOOM!

everything starts again

with more force than before

 

 

the living run scared

of this feerful storm

destruction is inevitable

and the fear will last

 

the rain floods the fields

the winds pull out trees

the lightning strikes everything

the hail tears up cars.

 

the hail lightens up

the wind less strong

the thunder less loud

and the lighting dulled

 

this could be the end

of this huge storm

but people are still scared

more destruction is en route.

 

a few hours pass

the lightning but a spark

the rain a drizzle

and the thunder a moan

 

the lightning gone now,

the rain dries too

all thats left is

a quiet boom

 

the sky starts to clear

as rays push through

the cracks in the clouds

and light the day

 

the sun pushes hard

using all its might

the rays clear the sky

as they are so bright

 

people come out now

as the birds come back

the sky is blue now

and there is a smile

 

the mother is thankful

no one is hurt

as she was scared all along

this storm was the end.

 

the storm is gone now

but destruction is not

however, the damages are materialistic

as they can be fixed!

 

the repairs must be made

yet they must reinforce

otherwise destruction will be

the same as the first.

[Speedskater 167]

its... well im not sure what i think of it...

[Protoman 56]

its... well im not sure what i think of it...

 

 

I agree with speedskater, lol....... :(

[Speedskater 167]

yeah its hard to...think about what you think about it

[ProSlasher 176]

lawl... i guess that is a good thing?

 

 

>_>.

 

It uhh was an assignment for class, and well... i wrote it with a girl in mind.

 

She broke up with her bf a while ago, yet she still thought about the heart break. this poem was to encourage her to move on... Which she has... (not to anyone atm, but soon me, i hope and pray that is :()

[Speedskater 167]

lawl... i guess that is a good thing?

 

 

>_>.

 

It uhh was an assignment for class, and well... i wrote it with a girl in mind.

 

She broke up with her bf a while ago, yet she still thought about the heart break. this poem was to encourage her to move on... Which she has... (not to anyone atm, but soon me, i hope and pray that is :D )

 

idk what to think about eather

[XGhozt 410]

I think it's reeaalllyyy long.. :D

[Suteki 114]

Nice job man, it makes sense to me.

[Speedskater 167]

k now i get it alot more b4 the post that u said she broke up. even though the worst of times come and come things will clear and become normal

Edited December 12, 2007 by speedskater

[ProSlasher 176]

YAY! Cookie for you.... Lol..

 

thanks guys. Idk, i may post all my work on here... >_>

[Speedskater 167]

i did always love cookies that i cant really eat :/

[Protoman 56]

I suppose its okay, i might post another poem or short story by the weekend.

[Major Zhuinden 128]

I should try to make a poem, I'm better at rhyming in english than in hungarian anyway, even though hungarian is more suitable for it.

 

There were no rhymes in the first few passages I read. That kinda makes it lose its value.

[ProSlasher 176]

I should try to make a poem, I'm better at rhyming in english than in hungarian anyway, even though hungarian is more suitable for it.

 

There were no rhymes in the first few passages I read. That kinda makes it lose its value.

 

 

I take it you have never heard of free verse???? >_>

[Magical_Trever 60]

great, can i have a Cookie?

[ProSlasher 176]

Well.... You can have a cookie, if you like the poem :D

[Magical_Trever 60]

ofcourse i like the poem :D

[Zar 696]

Pretty good.

So did this help her at all?