Magic Bitch 126 Posted February 4, 2008 Whispers in my ear, slowly making me lose that control. Slowly tickling my arm, trying to make me smile. Kissing me slowly, while looking at me in the eyes. You smile whispered the words I love you. You said the one thing I can’t express back….. And yet it doesn’t matter, as long as I know you do. Even thou I don’t express it much, I feel the same. Up to this point my smile was fake, with no point. You gave me a reason to smile, and for once feel happy. You lay next to me breathing heavily on me. I turned to face you lost in your eyes, I smiled. And said I love you…………. Yeah i know its short, but i think it speaks a thousand words. What do you, think? Share this post Link to post
ProSlasher 176 Posted February 4, 2008 I'll say it speaks closer to 10000 words. >.> I like it. I tihnk its awesome. Share this post Link to post
Lost Prodigy 158 Posted February 4, 2008 Flows really good with alot of emotion1 shweet job yeah? Share this post Link to post
FlyingArmyMan! 40 Posted February 5, 2008 Great poem. Has some strong emotion in it. Share this post Link to post
MadMatt 0 Posted February 22, 2008 nice i like it infact i got a new song i wrote last night i could post Share this post Link to post