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Whispers In The Dark

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Whispers in my ear, slowly making me lose that control.

Slowly tickling my arm, trying to make me smile.

Kissing me slowly, while looking at me in the eyes.

You smile whispered the words I love you.

You said the one thing I can’t express back…..

 

And yet it doesn’t matter, as long as I know you do.

Even thou I don’t express it much, I feel the same.

Up to this point my smile was fake, with no point.

You gave me a reason to smile, and for once feel happy.

You lay next to me breathing heavily on me.

I turned to face you lost in your eyes, I smiled.

And said I love you………….

 

 

 

 

Yeah i know its short, but i think it speaks a thousand words.

 

What do you, think?

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I'll say it speaks closer to 10000 words. >.>

 

I like it. I tihnk its awesome.

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Flows really good with alot of emotion1 shweet job yeah?

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Great poem. Has some strong emotion in it.

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nice i like it infact i got a new song i wrote last night i could post

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