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Poem: Regret.

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REGRET

Well my mind is frozen again

I see myself in the wind

thinking so deeply I’m not living

I know my thoughts are just begging

if my tortures ever begin

I will decide to let this live

not letting these thoughts forgive

i will choke these thoughts for the ones that lived

Fragments of memories in this mind

stunned, lost, in constant vibes

the time to decide why my hearts alive

Thriving deeply soul decides.

 

My first poem so plz dont jusde to hard.

Edited by g21_dxx

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I don't really get the poem :\

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Yeah it doesn't make much sense. But don't give up! I think if you re-worded the poem it might be much better.

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its something along the lines of guilt and all that lol.

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You dont understand., this makes perfect sense to me... and im aware that other ppl wont understand it...lol

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lol its a nice poem; needs a tiny bit of rewording

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I see sorrow in this poem. Even tho its not worded correctly it will make some sense.

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It will make some sense.

 

lol

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i liked it :D

kinda sorrowful though but

what should i expect from someone

who has a nirvana ava.

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Maybe it's your not really living your life your just thinking everything out. Cautious about your decisions?

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