XGhozt 410 Posted April 22, 2008 I didn't write this, but it's really good. I love her not for what she is. Not for what she can do for me. Not for the endless laughter we share. I love her because she is everything that I am missing. She is my other soul, the beating heart in my chest, and the fire of my eyes. Share this post Link to post
XGhozt 410 Posted April 23, 2008 Cripp do you even read topics anymore.. Share this post Link to post
Magical_Trever 60 Posted April 23, 2008 doesnt rhyme but not all poems do, its pretty good but too short. Share this post Link to post
XGhozt 410 Posted April 23, 2008 doesnt rhyme but not all poems do, its pretty good but too short. That's what I thought too, but I don't think it's really a poem. Share this post Link to post
Suteki 114 Posted April 23, 2008 Cripp do you even read topics anymore.. lol'ed It is a nice...whatever we are calling it. Share this post Link to post
Poply 178 Posted April 23, 2008 I generally find poems too cheesey if they do rhyme. It seems like the author threw in words and sentences just so they can have a rhyme when they could have used more appropriate words to illustrate their thoughts and feelings. Unless it is from an experienced poet, rhyming in poems just doesn't sound good. I think the poem Ghozt posted was pretty good but not one that would stick with me. Share this post Link to post
Bubb9 13 Posted April 23, 2008 , its pretty good but too short. Exactly what I thought. Share this post Link to post
plutomic 76 Posted April 23, 2008 Cripp do you even read topics anymore.. he is just a spammer...which is sad because he is admin Poems don't have to rhyme.....Black people do. Share this post Link to post
Magical_Trever 60 Posted April 23, 2008 Cripp do you even read topics anymore.. he is just a spammer...which is sad because he is admin Poems don't have to rhyme.....Black people do. you think hes a spammer, wtf are you doing now then? Share this post Link to post
Zar 696 Posted April 23, 2008 Not the most prophetic but it is good none the less. XGhozt, do you know who the author is? Share this post Link to post
MadMatt 0 Posted April 24, 2008 she also gives good head haha....so immature and thats coming from me so its not good ha Cripp do you even read topics anymore.. haha r u kidding cripp cant read haha ghozt your funny what is it then good ?? idk but its sweet Share this post Link to post
XGhozt 410 Posted April 24, 2008 Not the most prophetic but it is good none the less. XGhozt, do you know who the author is? No it was posted anonymously. Share this post Link to post