Why I Love Her

[XGhozt 410]

I didn't write this, but it's really good.

 

I love her not for what she is.

Not for what she can do for me.

Not for the endless laughter we share.

I love her because she is everything that I am missing.

She is my other soul, the beating heart in my chest, and the fire of my eyes.

[ViperSRT3g 224]

hm... It's rather nice. :)

[SwedenHacker 0]

wow, its nice . :)

[plutomic 76]

she also gives good head

[Mastric 77]

I think XGhozt is hitting on us :)

[blight 0]

I bet he really did write it.

[Bubb9 13]

I thought it was good.

[Cripp 167]

Very nice work man!

[XGhozt 410]

Cripp do you even read topics anymore..

[Magical_Trever 60]

doesnt rhyme but not all poems do, its pretty good but too short.

[XGhozt 410]

doesnt rhyme but not all poems do, its pretty good but too short.

That's what I thought too, but I don't think it's really a poem.

[Magical_Trever 60]

what is it then

[XGhozt 410]

Half a poem? I don't know..

[Suteki 114]

Cripp do you even read topics anymore..

 

lol'ed

 

It is a nice...whatever we are calling it.

[Poply 178]

I generally find poems too cheesey if they do rhyme. It seems like the author threw in words and sentences just so they can have a rhyme when they could have used more appropriate words to illustrate their thoughts and feelings. Unless it is from an experienced poet, rhyming in poems just doesn't sound good.

 

I think the poem Ghozt posted was pretty good but not one that would stick with me.

[Bubb9 13]

, its pretty good but too short.

 

Exactly what I thought.

[plutomic 76]

Cripp do you even read topics anymore..

he is just a spammer...which is sad because he is admin

 

 

 

Poems don't have to rhyme.....Black people do.

[Magical_Trever 60]

Cripp do you even read topics anymore..

he is just a spammer...which is sad because he is admin

 

 

 

Poems don't have to rhyme.....Black people do.

you think hes a spammer, wtf are you doing now then?

[Zar 696]

Not the most prophetic but it is good none the less.

 

XGhozt, do you know who the author is?

[MadMatt 0]

she also gives good head

 

haha....so immature and thats coming from me so its not good ha

 

Cripp do you even read topics anymore..

 

haha r u kidding cripp cant read haha ghozt your funny

 

 

what is it then

 

good ?? idk but its sweet

[XGhozt 410]

Not the most prophetic but it is good none the less.

 

XGhozt, do you know who the author is?

No it was posted anonymously.

[NEMISES 0]

wow thats reley nice....quite touching