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Love Poem

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Well I am going through a bad time right now and I really been down lately so here's what i wrote:

 

Although I cherish our time together,

I know this life won't last forever.

I hope that we will have all the precious times together,

and speak the words "it's over" never

 

I know that you can do better than me

For it is often easy to see.

But I believe we were meant to be

Me loving you, and you loving me.

 

I speak these words from within my soul

Trying to fathom me taking my role

Together till death is my impossible goal

Hoping the brutality of life, shall not take its toll

 

I see you and start to wonder

Is it worth dragging myself under

As quick as lightning comes from thunder

My mind is being torn asunder

 

And I know temptation is present often

But please resist and I promise not to soften

When the day comes, and I lay in my coffin

I know i can say this love was not boughten

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can i use a modified version of these for lyrics on one of my songs?

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well um lets see the mod version u create, i dont want it to be too close because i really worked hard on this = but yea just post it up. GUYS TELL ME IF U LIKE IT/NOT

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well um lets see the mod version u create, i dont want it to be too close because i really worked hard on this = but yea just post it up. GUYS TELL ME IF U LIKE IT/NOT

 

I actually found your poem to be somewhat entertaining. I used to write poetry on my spare time, but homework has been "killing" me lately.

 

What I'm trying to say is that I enjoyed it and believe it to be written quite well. Good job. :D

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Yeah I think you did a good job too . . .

 

It's a bird, it's a plane, no, it's PROTOMAN!

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Omg u guys like it? You really really like it? *snif* *sniff* lawl jk but thnks. and zar what is this protoman you speak of!?!?!?!

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Not bad if poetry is your thing.

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I'm not to big into poetry but, I enjoyed reading this. I think you did a good job this. ^^

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