DevL 0 Posted November 18, 2008 Well I am going through a bad time right now and I really been down lately so here's what i wrote: Although I cherish our time together, I know this life won't last forever. I hope that we will have all the precious times together, and speak the words "it's over" never I know that you can do better than me For it is often easy to see. But I believe we were meant to be Me loving you, and you loving me. I speak these words from within my soul Trying to fathom me taking my role Together till death is my impossible goal Hoping the brutality of life, shall not take its toll I see you and start to wonder Is it worth dragging myself under As quick as lightning comes from thunder My mind is being torn asunder And I know temptation is present often But please resist and I promise not to soften When the day comes, and I lay in my coffin I know i can say this love was not boughten Share this post Link to post
flirchinator 25 Posted November 18, 2008 can i use a modified version of these for lyrics on one of my songs? Share this post Link to post
DevL 0 Posted November 18, 2008 well um lets see the mod version u create, i dont want it to be too close because i really worked hard on this = but yea just post it up. GUYS TELL ME IF U LIKE IT/NOT Share this post Link to post
Protoman 56 Posted November 19, 2008 well um lets see the mod version u create, i dont want it to be too close because i really worked hard on this = but yea just post it up. GUYS TELL ME IF U LIKE IT/NOT I actually found your poem to be somewhat entertaining. I used to write poetry on my spare time, but homework has been "killing" me lately. What I'm trying to say is that I enjoyed it and believe it to be written quite well. Good job. :D Share this post Link to post
Zar 696 Posted November 19, 2008 Yeah I think you did a good job too . . . It's a bird, it's a plane, no, it's PROTOMAN! Share this post Link to post
DevL 0 Posted November 20, 2008 Omg u guys like it? You really really like it? *snif* *sniff* lawl jk but thnks. and zar what is this protoman you speak of!?!?!?! Share this post Link to post
lucasj 0 Posted August 12, 2009 I'm not to big into poetry but, I enjoyed reading this. I think you did a good job this. ^^ Share this post Link to post