flirchinator 25 Posted December 1, 2008 Well this is an original i also have them on a song and it sounds pretty touching http://limelinx.com/sample/b9e80c48f6ef4035d66eee8396ca71a6 tell me what u think everyday i tryevery i do it all cuz everyday is just another before i fall this aching passion that i contstantly feel yes it burns within and it consumes my heart with a flame of reckoning i can try to deny every single little fact i could deny it all and try to earn trust back while i recollect my heart, my soul, and a story in fact it was just 5 years ago when i felt incomplete and i felt all alone it wasnt up to me or so i came to see to find that girl that girl that would set me free but then you came like a rushing wind taking my heart like its never been the pieces of this puzzle they were all here just you and just me and forever we'll be a perfect fit just u and me i pray to be a perfect fit i am you and we shall be a perfect fit now its been 3 years from that fateful nite i live here with another girl it seems alrite its not the same with her as it was with you and me i work hard to try and make some harmony but as the breeze sways with the summer night i sit there and try with all my might to forget everything every bit of how we were one perfect fit just u and me i pray to be a perfect fit i am you and we shall be a perfect fit finally we're here to the present day another place another girl another real life play i thought i caught a glimpse of a girl i once knew her face her smile it all seemed just like you as the memories flood my mind once again of a past between us and how it had been it is true that i long for those simpler days how i miss everything in every single way just u and me i pray to be a perfect fit i am you and we shall be a perfect fit just u and me i pray to be a perfect fit i am you and we shall be a perfect fit Share this post Link to post
Valac 0 Posted December 1, 2008 hehe sounds like a song about sex and how well you fit in her vagina o.o Think about that now read it again. hehehehehehehehehehehe Share this post Link to post
JoshJayK 16,648 Posted December 1, 2008 LMAO WTF!!! -__________-;; I like it! Share this post Link to post
flirchinator 25 Posted December 1, 2008 lol it does seem like a sex song now i that i think about it again HAHA Share this post Link to post
Major Zhuinden 128 Posted December 1, 2008 No, it doesn't. Anyways, it really is a good lyrics, I'm impressed. I was expecting something a lot gayer. However, LEARN HOW TO SPELL NIGHT IT'S NIGHT NOT NITE -.- It was frickin annoying while I was reading it. Alrite is not alrite, it's alright. Waaah. Share this post Link to post
flirchinator 25 Posted December 1, 2008 thx zhuinden, yeah my bad i forgot to change some of the words from my online slang i tried to make to make it like a story Share this post Link to post
Valac 0 Posted December 1, 2008 LOL Zhuinden gave me a negative rep because I said it sounded like a song about sex. What a dork. Share this post Link to post
Major Zhuinden 128 Posted December 1, 2008 Your comment was not funny, and it was immature. Share this post Link to post
i like horny gurls 0 Posted December 2, 2008 hahaha... not my style of writing but i guess it counts... hahaha... nice share... Share this post Link to post