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A few poems..

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A few poems I've written over the months. One or two of which might not make sense. I hope you enjoy them even if you can't understand 'em. As you might've guessed, the words in "-" are the title. Review, I love feedback, whether it be positive or negative.

 

-The Hunter-

 

Hunting.. seeing .. smelling.. watching the prey

Underground.. sneaking.. creeping.. stalking the flesh of life

Never seen.. never heard.. waiting for nightfall

Teeming with life soon to end..

Entering the forest.. mist, covering his tracks.. almost.

Red mist covering his leaving footsteps..

______a deep red blanket covering the fallen..

______and the hunt is over..

______and he waits once more.

 

-Greed-

 

And the powerful shall rule..

And the weak shall obey..

And the knowledgeable shall think..

And the ignorant shall wait..

And the rich shall bathe in money..

And the poor shall drown in loss..

And the owners of the world shall laugh..

And the envious shall cry..

And you will sit there, watching the sadness..

That we call the human race..

 

-One I Love-

 

Beautiful

Amazing

Kind

One I Love

 

Warm

Earnest

Heartfelt

One I Love

 

Holding

Carrying

Protecting

One I Love

 

Laughing

Running

Joyous

One I Love

 

Understanding

Helping

Comforting

One I Love

 

There are many more words I could use

But none would be good enough for you

 

How your eyes glisten in the night

I tremble slightly, you filling my sight

 

Oh so beautiful and lovely you are

The one and only keeper of my heart

 

So gentle, caring.. like a dove

That is why you are.. the One I Love

 

-Long Lost Feeling-

 

Places to be

Serene

Booming, Exploding, Silence - Broken

Places to run

King of nothing

 

Memories

The Future, The Past

Find your past

Walk your path

Does the walker choose the path?

Or the path choose the walker?

 

Enlightened Ignorance

Thoughtful, Serene again

Places to rest

 

Death hovers

But even in Death

May the Fallen be triumphant

 

And it is quiet once more

And i am alone

Away from the noise,

the terror,

the love

Am I lost?

Are we all lost?

 

We are all lost

Until we find ourselves..

And each other

 

And then music fills me,

bells ring,

trumpets blare,

the notes

Like bottled sunshine

And it is gone..

Gone in a flash

 

And alone I wait

for birds song once more...

Then I smile

I smile, not cry

I smile because it happened,

I do not cry because it is over

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They don't rhyme... :o

 

Lol jk. They're all well thought out I see.

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Poems don't have to rhyme! :o In the poem "One I Love" I cheated by using a lot of half-rhymes... but oh well.. Something I myself like about "The Hunter" is that it's an acrostic, adds a cool effect.

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Poems don't have to rhyme! :o In the poem "One I Love" I cheated by using a lot of half-rhymes... but oh well.. Something I myself like about "The Hunter" is that it's an acrostic, adds a cool effect.

 

I like the setup in your 3rd poem. Lots of adjectives and then expressing that sometimes words aren't enough to describe what we see. Beautiful, dude.

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Poems don't have to rhyme! :o In the poem "One I Love" I cheated by using a lot of half-rhymes... but oh well.. Something I myself like about "The Hunter" is that it's an acrostic, adds a cool effect.

 

I like the setup in your 3rd poem. Lots of adjectives and then expressing that sometimes words aren't enough to describe what we see. Beautiful, dude.

 

Thanks! :) It's been so long since I wrote that :3 I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^

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