Badass

[DevL 0]

 

What do you think?

[ShadowScourge 61]

No blend, rough cut. The concept is nice, but the process was choppy.

Look at the bottom of Edward's render; you'll see that it is flat, most likely because the render was made like that.

I'd suggest maybe some blurring/smudging, as well as some color balance in order to smooth out the transition and make them seem like they are supposed to be together.

Also, try and make a background. Fiddle with clouds, brushes, c4d's. White backgrounds are just too bland...

And, last comment would be... spice up the text. It's really boring...

 

P.S. It's not like i hate it... i just want to help :D Good job, btw.

[DevL 0]

Shadow thanks for ctisism but idk what you're meaning i JUST startted being halway DECENT with gimp. i am just learning how to change colors with path and thts all im doing except for some smudging and other stuff but i suck with it.

[ShadowScourge 61]

Dude, let it not discourage you. You're doing great for a newbie! :)

I'm just pointing out things that i'd do. ><

Try working with feathering/erasing/blurring. Start with the bottom of Edward, and try to make it fade out, rather than have such a sharp, flat edge. :D

[DevL 0]

Ok i did the blur thing but as for featheing, i dont see it on GIMP menu

Edited November 29, 2008 by DevL

[ShadowScourge 61]

Feathering basically is just having it fade out instead of hard, sharp edges.

Edward Elric is the guy in the middle. He's from Full Metal Alchemist... >_>

[DevL 0]

Yea well i jusr learned howto change colors with paths but idk what else i could do. anything else?

 

preferably something with the text or background

Edited November 29, 2008 by DevL

[JoshJayK 16,648]

What's a C4D? Can I do it on Photoshop?

[ShadowScourge 61]

C4Ds are just like... 3d like objects... google images search them :D

Uh... i'd start with backgrounds. Don't even use a render for now, just take a big slab of background, and fiddle with it until you get something nice, then try it again with something completely different, until you have a good sense of different backgrounds. :D

Then you start work with renders... and text...

[DeathTheKid 130]

Nice um.....Naruto.

[Cripp 167]

I would remove the bad ass and then making it bigger. Thus then I would use it as my desktop. Text are hard to fit in on somethings.

[Valac 0]

Pretty good for a graphic noob.

 

I mean that in a nice way.

[DevL 0]

Ok guys just to let u know i didnt MAKE the pic i just got it off internet and modded colors abd added the text. so if u thought i did some amazing assembling of characters, sorry.

 

VALAC!! thanks lol

[ShadowScourge 61]

Haha... i'd get a couple renders and start working on my own stuff. Modding is great and all, but the credit still goes to the original maker... :D

Start with some backgrounds. And maybe even render that image above, just for some practice.

[DeathTheKid 130]

Pretty good for a graphic noob.

 

I mean that in a nice way.

Your picture scares me.

 

And yeah remove the BadAss.

[Mudkiepz 81]

tahts hawt