yeah i think you tried to build the song around the voices. it's a nice beat but too repetitive. if that's what you were going for, then my bad. otherwise it's just like game music for some bad flash game. no offense because i do like electronic music. you could make the voices quieter and run them through a filter so it sounds kind of alienish?
or just ditch the voices and add some effects to the song.
are you using fruity loops?
-EDIT. my bad, he's banned. lol disregard this