g21_dxx 14 Posted February 17, 2008 (edited) REGRET Well my mind is frozen again I see myself in the wind thinking so deeply I’m not living I know my thoughts are just begging if my tortures ever begin I will decide to let this live not letting these thoughts forgive i will choke these thoughts for the ones that lived Fragments of memories in this mind stunned, lost, in constant vibes the time to decide why my hearts alive Thriving deeply soul decides. My first poem so plz dont jusde to hard. Edited February 21, 2008 by g21_dxx Share this post Link to post
Lost Prodigy 158 Posted February 20, 2008 No comments? Theres one! I don't really get the poem :\ Share this post Link to post
Zar 696 Posted February 20, 2008 Yeah it doesn't make much sense. But don't give up! I think if you re-worded the poem it might be much better. Share this post Link to post
g21_dxx 14 Posted February 20, 2008 its something along the lines of guilt and all that lol. Share this post Link to post
Major Zhuinden 128 Posted February 28, 2008 Hey, I like it. It at least has rhymes, that's a plus. Share this post Link to post
g21_dxx 14 Posted August 7, 2008 You dont understand., this makes perfect sense to me... and im aware that other ppl wont understand it...lol Share this post Link to post
Union1 33 Posted August 7, 2008 lol its a nice poem; needs a tiny bit of rewording Share this post Link to post
Cripp 167 Posted August 7, 2008 I see sorrow in this poem. Even tho its not worded correctly it will make some sense. Share this post Link to post
MadMatt 0 Posted September 4, 2008 i liked it :D kinda sorrowful though but what should i expect from someone who has a nirvana ava. Share this post Link to post
DevL 0 Posted September 4, 2008 Maybe it's your not really living your life your just thinking everything out. Cautious about your decisions? Share this post Link to post