Dr.Winkey 57 Posted May 30, 2007 (edited) LIBERATION! by: Mr. Winkey The feeling, raging inside, The burning sensation I can not hide My face turns red, As my eyes buldge out of my head. The veins on my neck teeming with blood, Cells in my brain dying from the flood. My lungs craving the air, I gasp . . . but nothing is there. I pant, heave and tilt my head high, My body is stressed and I feel I could die. I bend over about to vomit, I recognize a smell . . . is that comet? I shrug it off because who cares? I am trying not to get tears! I push one more time for liberation, That's what happens in constipation! :lawl: Edited May 30, 2007 by Mr.Winkey Share this post Link to post
FlyingArmyMan! 40 Posted May 30, 2007 And I thought this came from the heart. Share this post Link to post
Protoman 56 Posted November 23, 2007 not bad at all, but i still prefer magic bitch's peoms. They seem to be more descripitve, giving more emotion. Share this post Link to post
Cripp 167 Posted November 23, 2007 rofl once again this was posted in may.... I dont even know if these post are ok to post in. Share this post Link to post
Protoman 56 Posted November 23, 2007 rofl once again this was posted in may.... I dont even know if these post are ok to post in. why don't people take out the old threads, so people wouldn't continue posting in them? Share this post Link to post
Zar 696 Posted November 23, 2007 Most of us pay attention to what we are posting about and reading . . . Share this post Link to post