ProSlasher 176 Posted December 10, 2007 The following was written by me. Enjoy. A warm sunny day with a few white clouds becomes so ugly so fast it's really quite odd. The white clouds build throughout the hours until they are blue and the sky is black the air is sthick the clouds are dense the storm rolls in as the birds flee the clasp of thunder then the light bolt followed by strong wind then reain at last the rain's rage grows the bolts come quicker the thunder is louder and the trees bend. now starts the hail as tree limbs fall from the deadly winds with no relief now a loud hiss fills the air with scare people duck and cover as the tornado stirs the tornado comes through plowing its path then it all stops "Is that all?" the sky is still dark people come out to view the rain, the wind, and hail all gone... thirty seconds pass then a loud BOOM! everything starts again with more force than before the living run scared of this feerful storm destruction is inevitable and the fear will last the rain floods the fields the winds pull out trees the lightning strikes everything the hail tears up cars. the hail lightens up the wind less strong the thunder less loud and the lighting dulled this could be the end of this huge storm but people are still scared more destruction is en route. a few hours pass the lightning but a spark the rain a drizzle and the thunder a moan the lightning gone now, the rain dries too all thats left is a quiet boom the sky starts to clear as rays push through the cracks in the clouds and light the day the sun pushes hard using all its might the rays clear the sky as they are so bright people come out now as the birds come back the sky is blue now and there is a smile the mother is thankful no one is hurt as she was scared all along this storm was the end. the storm is gone now but destruction is not however, the damages are materialistic as they can be fixed! the repairs must be made yet they must reinforce otherwise destruction will be the same as the first. Share this post Link to post
Speedskater 167 Posted December 10, 2007 its... well im not sure what i think of it... Share this post Link to post
Protoman 56 Posted December 10, 2007 its... well im not sure what i think of it... I agree with speedskater, lol....... :( Share this post Link to post
Speedskater 167 Posted December 10, 2007 yeah its hard to...think about what you think about it Share this post Link to post
ProSlasher 176 Posted December 10, 2007 lawl... i guess that is a good thing? >_>. It uhh was an assignment for class, and well... i wrote it with a girl in mind. She broke up with her bf a while ago, yet she still thought about the heart break. this poem was to encourage her to move on... Which she has... (not to anyone atm, but soon me, i hope and pray that is :() Share this post Link to post
Speedskater 167 Posted December 11, 2007 lawl... i guess that is a good thing? >_>. It uhh was an assignment for class, and well... i wrote it with a girl in mind. She broke up with her bf a while ago, yet she still thought about the heart break. this poem was to encourage her to move on... Which she has... (not to anyone atm, but soon me, i hope and pray that is :D ) idk what to think about eather Share this post Link to post
Speedskater 167 Posted December 12, 2007 (edited) k now i get it alot more b4 the post that u said she broke up. even though the worst of times come and come things will clear and become normal Edited December 12, 2007 by speedskater Share this post Link to post
ProSlasher 176 Posted December 13, 2007 YAY! Cookie for you.... Lol.. thanks guys. Idk, i may post all my work on here... >_> Share this post Link to post
Speedskater 167 Posted December 13, 2007 i did always love cookies that i cant really eat :/ Share this post Link to post
Protoman 56 Posted December 13, 2007 I suppose its okay, i might post another poem or short story by the weekend. Share this post Link to post
Major Zhuinden 128 Posted December 13, 2007 I should try to make a poem, I'm better at rhyming in english than in hungarian anyway, even though hungarian is more suitable for it. There were no rhymes in the first few passages I read. That kinda makes it lose its value. Share this post Link to post
ProSlasher 176 Posted December 13, 2007 I should try to make a poem, I'm better at rhyming in english than in hungarian anyway, even though hungarian is more suitable for it. There were no rhymes in the first few passages I read. That kinda makes it lose its value. I take it you have never heard of free verse???? >_> Share this post Link to post
ProSlasher 176 Posted December 14, 2007 Well.... You can have a cookie, if you like the poem :D Share this post Link to post
Zar 696 Posted January 19, 2008 Pretty good. So did this help her at all? Share this post Link to post